tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1072787960288697411.post1404496583777875826..comments2023-03-25T03:16:27.835-05:00Comments on The Storyteller's Treehouse: A Sample of My WritingUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1072787960288697411.post-84614495052013742832008-06-18T16:57:00.000-05:002008-06-18T16:57:00.000-05:00r2k- Thank you for your comments! About the Bible:...r2k- Thank you for your comments! <BR/><BR/>About the Bible: I, too, love the poetry in the Psalms and other books. It does have a unique and intriguing quality to it. But I like it not only because it is powerful at the poetic level- it also has amazing spiritual influence! My church is going through a series about the Psalms right now. It's called Thinking and Feeling with God, because the poetry is emotional (connecting with our feelings) and logical (connecting with our mind). I love to study the Bible and hopefully learn a lot more about how to use the beauty and mystery of language to Glorify God, because, after all, He is the true Author of all things.Rachel Kimberlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750953159925477298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1072787960288697411.post-65555178511532187612008-06-18T14:35:00.000-05:002008-06-18T14:35:00.000-05:00Great story! Very funny images. We had some turk...Great story! Very funny images. We had some turkey problems in our area in the past also. That sound they make "Obba gobble gobble" is burned into my brain because it is fun from a distance but dangerous up close. I have seen them attack bikers in the middle of the road.<BR/><BR/>I love to do poetry and short stories , and have some good news for you if you want to improve your skills:<BR/><BR/>The bible. Some of the best, most dramatic poetry can be found in there, and that kind of poetry is my style. Do not be afraid to start your most powerful sentences with "and", finding a rythm. Even comedy can be better when it is built inside a frame of serious text. Use timing also: Rather than saying "This was the reason why I was so mad", say "This, then, was the source of all my anger."<BR/><BR/>I guess what I mean to say is make your work seem as important as you can, because it must matter to you if you spend your time working on it!High Power Rocketryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11537203640644706903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1072787960288697411.post-17356081488651969282008-06-17T07:43:00.000-05:002008-06-17T07:43:00.000-05:00My only comment is "HA HA HA!!" Good writing! I li...My only comment is "HA HA HA!!" Good writing! I like it.DTH Rockethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09222212036229618785noreply@blogger.com